[.Love.Is.Pressious.] |
 Feb 13 2007, 07:27 PM
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No matter what you say;
No matter what you do; I will allways love you; Forever till the end; Beating hearts; Blood rushing; Butterflies; Day dreams; This I tell you is love; Its the end to all pain; Suffering and torture; Its you and me; Just us; You're more than life; You're more than love; You're the center of my heart; Keeping me alive; Smiling thoughts; Laughing memories; Great times; Endless; You are me; Love, life, hope; Together forever; Till life has past; Just know that I love you; |
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| *Uronacid* |
Feb 13 2007, 11:18 PM
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I love this whole poem... except for one part... "it's you and me baby", I guess there is nothing wrong with it, but I just don't like the use of the word "baby". If you took it out I personally think it would be better without the word "baby".
It's just an opinion though.. seriously... don't take that to heart. |
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*.brokendoll.* [.Love.Is.Pressious.] Feb 13 2007, 07:27 PM
*.brokendoll.* Yeah I agree..I edited it :] thanks for telling me... Feb 14 2007, 08:55 PM JakeKKing Ugh. Haha. I'm sorry, this is just my opinion.... Feb 14 2007, 09:01 PM *.brokendoll.* ....that was just pointless...no offence Feb 14 2007, 09:02 PM JakeKKing Well, I was giving my opinion. Didn't you see ... Feb 14 2007, 09:15 PM *.brokendoll.* Sorry...I just feel like sh**...yeah...thank you..... Feb 14 2007, 09:17 PM mishyerr Reminds me of something I would hear in a techno l... Feb 14 2007, 09:17 PM *.brokendoll.* Thanks...I love ur recent post :] Feb 14 2007, 09:18 PM Kathleen I like it except for the unnecessary, superfluous ... Feb 14 2007, 10:02 PM *.brokendoll.* yeah...i really dont know why i do those things an... Feb 14 2007, 10:47 PM The Abominable C-Pillar You see what I mean. This is pleasant. It doesn... Feb 27 2007, 10:17 AM
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