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 Feb 3 2007, 06:47 PM
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Eternal Syn  Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000  |
Reminiscing about the past, thinking of what was, and dreaming of what could have been. Wishin` and believin` that we were still together is the part of me that's stuck in the past. The past that was us, and us no longer exists. Only in the past and in my memories does "us" still exist forevermore. Wishin` and wonderin` of what could have been is the dreamer in me. One dreams for us even though the grim reality is that "us" is never to come around again. And the other remembers what we used to be. Stuck in the past, but dreaming of the future. This bears the question of wondering, how much of me, pays attention to the present?
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Feb 3 2007, 07:22 PM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
haha thanks man
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Cloud_X Us Feb 3 2007, 06:47 PM
Chessboxxa 101 Hey I really like the ending man. Got me thinking. Feb 3 2007, 06:56 PM jayen This is brilliant, I loved it.
I like how you ... Feb 3 2007, 08:09 PM Cloud_X hahah funny thing was that i though of the ending ... Feb 3 2007, 08:13 PM
jayen QUOTE(Cloud_X @ Feb 4 2007, 10:13 AM) hah... Feb 3 2007, 08:15 PM Cloud_X yeah..usually, it's think of the first line. t... Feb 3 2007, 08:19 PM Chessboxxa 101 wow after the last line? nice creative piece. Feb 4 2007, 12:16 AM kayceeisms That last line is magnificent, good job. :] Feb 4 2007, 12:19 AM |
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