Complications, poem..these are gonna be rare |
 Jan 30 2007, 02:07 AM
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Eternal Syn  Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000  |
Comlication arisen from situations
Situations that have been caused by nothing but frustrations Frustrations formed by naivety Naivety brought about by anxiety Anxiety brings about nothing but fear And with it, happiness begins to fade and disappear Loss of happiness is loss of self Store happiness on the shelf Never lose it or misplace it Complications may arise, But that's no reason for happiness to be at a demise |
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Jan 30 2007, 08:16 AM
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look for the stars as the sun goes down Group: Member Posts: 493 Joined: Aug 2006 Member No: 453,963 |
wow this is actually really good. nothing to emo. and not so long. i love it.
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Cloud_X Complications Jan 30 2007, 02:07 AM
S0ul_Reaper As expected of you, Good job/ I liked how contrast... Jan 30 2007, 08:48 AM Cloud_X thanks :D Jan 30 2007, 06:39 PM mono_logue i liked how you put it into a rhyme scheme. Jan 30 2007, 10:31 PM
Chessboxxa 101 I like it. It got me thinking of a whole new persp... Jan 31 2007, 12:55 PM |
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