Kelly Has A Secret, A Domestic Violence Perspective |
 Jan 6 2007, 01:43 PM
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Jan 21 2007, 12:32 AM
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 and they say imitation is flattering Group: Member Posts: 1,337 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,269 |
I like how it really picks up the pace and gets more and more intense as it goes on. I can really hear it in my head, in a good way =]
The only problem I had was the substitution of 2 for "to" and 4 for "for" I dunno. It just kinda threw me off. Good work, though. |
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CESARE BORGIA Kelly Has A Secret Jan 6 2007, 01:43 PM
Cloud_X I like it. Very dark. You got nice multies in ther... Jan 6 2007, 06:02 PM CESARE BORGIA Thanks for the feedback. Jan 7 2007, 05:41 PM hixfive i like how it relates to real life
great job Jan 20 2007, 11:03 PM
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