~*Voyage to heaven*~, An original poem |
 Dec 29 2006, 05:32 PM
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 Lose yourself and fly away, hide away for the day  Group: Member Posts: 242 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 446,527  |
I am only in grade 6, cut me some slack! lol, well, i came up with this poem in like 5 minuets at my grandpas during summer break so i decided to post it
~*Voyage to heaven*~ The worlds harsh troubles bite at me With every step I take But God's voice is in my ear telling me what move to make Up ahead I see a light, bright and shining in the night God has led me to ths place And now I see His smiling face He embraces me with care leading me to the heaven we'll share I close my eyes and drift to sleep Knowing I will no longer weep From the worlds spinning troubles To God's great light What I found in the night I wrote this to sorta get over the fact my unvle died i guess, its about a persons journey to heaven at the end of life. Oh yea, and the last line "What i found in the night' is just saying they found heaven. Comments appreciated! |
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Jan 20 2007, 11:09 PM
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 ALLISON Group: Official Designer Posts: 3,372 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 310,259 |
wow this is reallyy good
your a really good writer -- & your a 6th grader :] |
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Youraisemeup ~*Voyage to heaven*~ Dec 29 2006, 05:32 PM
CESARE BORGIA This is damn good, everything that makes a poem gr... Jan 6 2007, 01:21 PM
Youraisemeup QUOTE(CESARE BORGIA @ Jan 6 2007, 12:21 P... Feb 21 2007, 10:23 PM Fragil_BlackRose You're in 6th grade 0.0 Jan 7 2007, 03:51 PM |
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