Hopelessness, Help retitle yeah? :D |
 Jan 9 2007, 08:19 PM
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Eternal Syn  Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000  |
This heart of mine feigns for what it cannot have. For what it cannot have, it would give anything, clothes off its back, jewels, the very world if she had ever asked for it. Yet, the question begging to be answered is, why must it desire what eludes its very grasp? Is it curiosity? Or is it the very beauty of her that keeps it entranced? Whatever the reason, whatever the cause, whatever the desire, it seems that she is behind it all. She is the reason why this heart beats restlessly and she is why it is kept up feverishly all night without aim or resolve. The only way to stall what resides in this chest is to be with her, hear her voice, and feel her touch. So long as nothing severs this relationship with her. Then this heart has no fear for what awaits it next. For nothing is more horrid than the inability to speak with her, to be with her, or to touch her. Perhaps in time, these qualms in my chest will slow. But at the moment they show no sign of stopping. Regardless, will she ever feel the same way that this heart feels for her? If only questions like these could be answered with simplicity…
//edit::change title to forlorn..if anything..thank you :D |
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Jan 16 2007, 02:29 AM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
yes i am a guy. but i can also control my urges very well thank you very much. :D and no she's not taken. of that i'm sure. and yeah i wrote other pieces about it i guess. but i didn't post them in here. or did i...hmm check the new topic made by My Cinderella. but i've been writing since 7th or 8th grade, so my writing has had time to grow and progress from what it used to be.
QUOTE it was better than what I've seen some sixteen year olds write thanks for that remark :D i'm honored. i guess you can label me as a hopeless romantic. xD
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Jan 16 2007, 10:50 PM
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 lackadaisical Group: Member Posts: 203 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 113,463 |
QUOTE(Cloud_X @ Jan 16 2007, 2:29 AM)  yeah i wrote other pieces about it i guess. but i didn't post them in here. or did i...hmm check the new topic made by My Cinderella. but i've been writing since 7th or 8th grade Ohh, did not see that new topic, I'm a "overlooker". I'll check that out and read some of your other pieces! |
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Cloud_X Hopelessness Jan 9 2007, 08:19 PM
mono_logue that is how i currently feel about this one girl..... Jan 15 2007, 06:07 PM sakaitone It's an extremely romantic piece of writing. ... Jan 15 2007, 09:11 PM Cloud_X hahah romantic really? i guess. anyways. forlorn i... Jan 15 2007, 10:28 PM
sakaitone QUOTE(Cloud_X @ Jan 15 2007, 10:28 PM) ha... Jan 15 2007, 11:23 PM Cloud_X QUOTE(sakaitone @ Jan 15 2007, 11:23 PM) ... Jan 16 2007, 12:07 AM sakaitone QUOTE(Cloud_X @ Jan 16 2007, 12:07 AM) ha... Jan 16 2007, 12:31 AM mono_logue does this somehow relate to your life.. or did it ... Jan 15 2007, 11:32 PM |
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