Hopelessness, Help retitle yeah? :D |
 Jan 9 2007, 08:19 PM
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Eternal Syn  Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000  |
This heart of mine feigns for what it cannot have. For what it cannot have, it would give anything, clothes off its back, jewels, the very world if she had ever asked for it. Yet, the question begging to be answered is, why must it desire what eludes its very grasp? Is it curiosity? Or is it the very beauty of her that keeps it entranced? Whatever the reason, whatever the cause, whatever the desire, it seems that she is behind it all. She is the reason why this heart beats restlessly and she is why it is kept up feverishly all night without aim or resolve. The only way to stall what resides in this chest is to be with her, hear her voice, and feel her touch. So long as nothing severs this relationship with her. Then this heart has no fear for what awaits it next. For nothing is more horrid than the inability to speak with her, to be with her, or to touch her. Perhaps in time, these qualms in my chest will slow. But at the moment they show no sign of stopping. Regardless, will she ever feel the same way that this heart feels for her? If only questions like these could be answered with simplicity…
//edit::change title to forlorn..if anything..thank you :D |
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Jan 15 2007, 10:28 PM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
hahah romantic really? i guess. anyways. forlorn is nice :D and hopelessness is too long. that's why i was asking for a retitle :] thank you sakaitone.
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Jan 15 2007, 11:23 PM
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 lackadaisical Group: Member Posts: 203 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 113,463 |
QUOTE(Cloud_X @ Jan 15 2007, 10:28 PM)  hahah romantic really? i guess. anyways. forlorn is nice :D and hopelessness is too long. that's why i was asking for a retitle :] thank you sakaitone. You welcome.  You don't think it's romantic? If a guy gave this to me and said he wrote this about me, I would date him in a heartbeat, knowing me I would probably even go as far as to |
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Jan 16 2007, 12:07 AM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
QUOTE(sakaitone @ Jan 15 2007, 11:23 PM) You welcome. You don't think it's romantic? If a guy gave this to me and said he wrote this about me, I would date him in a heartbeat, knowing me I would probably even go as far as to hahahah that's nice. tackle / hug. and i'm no stalker or some shit. i'm 16 hahah xD and to mono_logue, it's both. i was listening to Yiruma - Kiss the Rain when i wrote it. everything there is basically true about my life. but all of that was written within an hour off the top of my head. :D |
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Cloud_X Hopelessness Jan 9 2007, 08:19 PM
mono_logue that is how i currently feel about this one girl..... Jan 15 2007, 06:07 PM sakaitone It's an extremely romantic piece of writing. ... Jan 15 2007, 09:11 PM
sakaitone QUOTE(Cloud_X @ Jan 16 2007, 12:07 AM) ha... Jan 16 2007, 12:31 AM mono_logue does this somehow relate to your life.. or did it ... Jan 15 2007, 11:32 PM Cloud_X yes i am a guy. but i can also control my urges ve... Jan 16 2007, 02:29 AM sakaitone QUOTE(Cloud_X @ Jan 16 2007, 2:29 AM) yea... Jan 16 2007, 10:50 PM |
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