an essay for english, will someone look it over for me? |
 Jan 7 2007, 10:53 PM
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 i'm maggie =]  Group: Member Posts: 3,607 Joined: Jan 2006 Member No: 361,616  |
will someone close to my age (im 16. a junior in hs.) read through it and maybe tell me what they think of it?
the "project" was cause and effect. i know it's not the best thing in the world but it's just a draft. QUOTE Cause & Effect taken out. sorry. can someone please close this for me? we submit everything to turnitin.com for our final drafts and the software program scans through every site on the internet to see if we have copied someone else's work. and i definitely dont want this to pop up and then have to explain to the teacher. thank you. =] |
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| *My Cinderella.* |
Jan 9 2007, 09:55 AM
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Well, I'm not where near being a junior just yet. I read it over and it was very well written. You did a good job on it. Other than a few grammatical mistakes that the other poster pointed out, I can't seem to find anything wrong with it.
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APPLEjuicex an essay for english Jan 7 2007, 10:53 PM
APPLEjuicex oh, and i wasnt sure if i should have posted it he... Jan 7 2007, 11:11 PM xxamandajanexx Sounds good to me and i'm a junior in cp engli... Jan 8 2007, 12:14 AM gles_so_def I don't think posting an essay on CB is the be... Jan 8 2007, 12:24 AM CESARE BORGIA I'm 22 so i got 6 years on you, (hopefully tha... Jan 8 2007, 01:15 PM
APPLEjuicex QUOTE(xxamandajanexx @ Jan 7 2007, 11:14 ... Jan 8 2007, 04:29 PM Wo0yaPo0ya It's pretty well written. Would you like us to... Jan 8 2007, 05:23 PM APPLEjuicex ^^ OH! thank youu!
ill fix on my computer ... Jan 8 2007, 05:57 PM Wo0yaPo0ya You're welcome. :) I was afraid you'd thin... Jan 8 2007, 06:51 PM APPLEjuicex ^^ wed.
no, im not "nitpicky" at all. if... Jan 8 2007, 06:57 PM |
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