an essay for english, will someone look it over for me? |
 Jan 7 2007, 10:53 PM
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 i'm maggie =]  Group: Member Posts: 3,607 Joined: Jan 2006 Member No: 361,616  |
will someone close to my age (im 16. a junior in hs.) read through it and maybe tell me what they think of it?
the "project" was cause and effect. i know it's not the best thing in the world but it's just a draft. QUOTE Cause & Effect taken out. sorry. can someone please close this for me? we submit everything to turnitin.com for our final drafts and the software program scans through every site on the internet to see if we have copied someone else's work. and i definitely dont want this to pop up and then have to explain to the teacher. thank you. =] |
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Jan 8 2007, 01:15 PM
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I'm 22 so i got 6 years on you, (hopefully thats close enough) anyhow, i think you did a very good job on that, it gets your point across in a clear way and it looks like you did your homework about the Kubler-Ross stages, i can't find any faults in your writing.
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Jan 8 2007, 04:29 PM
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i'm maggie =] Group: Member Posts: 3,607 Joined: Jan 2006 Member No: 361,616 |
QUOTE(xxamandajanexx @ Jan 7 2007, 11:14 PM)  Sounds good to me and i'm a junior in cp english! Better then most of the people in my class would ever write. I didn't see any mistakes. im in ap english as well. QUOTE(gles_so_def @ Jan 7 2007, 11:24 PM) I don't think posting an essay on CB is the best thing to do. People might plagiarize (sp?) or i would hope not. QUOTE(CESARE BORGIA @ Jan 8 2007, 12:15 PM) I'm 22 so i got 6 years on you, (hopefully thats close enough) anyhow, i think you did a very good job on that, it gets your point across in a clear way and it looks like you did your homework about the Kubler-Ross stages, i can't find any faults in your writing. actually, i learned it in psychology last semester so i thought it would be wise to include it. =] thanks, guys. i wasn't really sure if my essay as a whole meshed together well enough. |
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APPLEjuicex an essay for english Jan 7 2007, 10:53 PM
APPLEjuicex oh, and i wasnt sure if i should have posted it he... Jan 7 2007, 11:11 PM xxamandajanexx Sounds good to me and i'm a junior in cp engli... Jan 8 2007, 12:14 AM gles_so_def I don't think posting an essay on CB is the be... Jan 8 2007, 12:24 AM
Wo0yaPo0ya It's pretty well written. Would you like us to... Jan 8 2007, 05:23 PM APPLEjuicex ^^ OH! thank youu!
ill fix on my computer ... Jan 8 2007, 05:57 PM Wo0yaPo0ya You're welcome. :) I was afraid you'd thin... Jan 8 2007, 06:51 PM APPLEjuicex ^^ wed.
no, im not "nitpicky" at all. if... Jan 8 2007, 06:57 PM
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