Poetry help! i'm really stuck |
Poetry help! i'm really stuck |
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I have to write a poem reflecting on my grandma or my memories of her for her birthday event thing. I know it's kinda of a personal thing but she's just like any grandma kind and friendly, loving u know te usual.Anyways my job is to make a poem. It's kind of a formal thing so it can't be humourous.( well i don;t think it'll be very good if it was) I going to try to go with a rhyming scheme. Also.. i want to it sound professional but not too professional but then again i don't want it to sound like a little kid could write sumthing way better than me. The first line is the most important right? So i've been like stuck thinking for one.. that isn't so sappy or just weird. So.. can anyone help me out to what the first line might be? or maybe give me ideas of what it should be like ?
The best thing i can think of is something like "as time goes byI still remember all the times we've shared together" Bad right? It sounds kinda sappy. I've been stuck on this for like a month. seriously.. i wrote a couple poems but they all really really.. really.. suck. ![]() |
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as time goes by, I still remember all the times we've shared
even though their just memories, i can never forget though were both getting old, i would always care living my life with you, how can i ever regret I will always be here whenever your feeling down ill make you laugh just to turn that frown around your a very special person, i hold you dear especially when i need that person to hold me near do you remember when I was young you held me in your arms from that moment I knew you would protect me from harm if ever that day comes where life takes you away i will still love you each and every day got carried away but maybe something like this, will help boost your imagination, rhyming doesnt always have to be a poem but i found it easier for me ti rhyme. |
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