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zebzie
post Dec 16 2006, 05:52 AM
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post Dec 22 2006, 12:28 AM
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Here's some constructive advice (and a few personal preferences):

- I think the colors are a little too varied. I personally like the whole blue/purple color scheme, but in the future, you might want to try sticking with either "warm" or "cool" colors instead of the whole spectrum.

- If you stick with the reds/yellows, they seem to be a little too oversaturated and contrasty. Tone that down a bit.

- The planets' atmospheres are both whitish - I recommend changing them to reflect the color of the sky/nebula to seem more realistic.

- Is the terrain a Terragen render? It seems a little low-quality, try rendering at twice the final size and scaling back to get a higher-res look and feel.

- Also on the lines of the render (if it is one), the tops of the hills/trees are completely black, while the bottoms near the water are lighter. I'm assuming the main light source is the sun right next to the right planet; if this is the case, adjust the sunlight so that it makes the tops glow instead of the bottoms.
 
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post Dec 22 2006, 04:26 AM
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QUOTE(DrNick311 @ Dec 22 2006, 4:28 PM) *
Here's some constructive advice (and a few personal preferences):

- I think the colors are a little too varied. I personally like the whole blue/purple color scheme, but in the future, you might want to try sticking with either "warm" or "cool" colors instead of the whole spectrum.

- If you stick with the reds/yellows, they seem to be a little too oversaturated and contrasty. Tone that down a bit.

- The planets' atmospheres are both whitish - I recommend changing them to reflect the color of the sky/nebula to seem more realistic.

- Is the terrain a Terragen render? It seems a little low-quality, try rendering at twice the final size and scaling back to get a higher-res look and feel.

- Also on the lines of the render (if it is one), the tops of the hills/trees are completely black, while the bottoms near the water are lighter. I'm assuming the main light source is the sun right next to the right planet; if this is the case, adjust the sunlight so that it makes the tops glow instead of the bottoms.


Wow, thanks for the extended critique! Ok, so it isnt a render, its an actual photograph (the lake). The whole point was to change from warm to cool in the sky (don't ask me why, I just wanted it to :P) There is an updated version, but I cant be nothered to update it. Oh, and the planets are whitish cause...well..I dont know! It just is cause it looked cool :P Thanks again for the posts
 

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zebzie   Ambience   Dec 16 2006, 05:52 AM
icy_wonderland   That is beautiful!! I love the colors, it...   Dec 16 2006, 06:48 AM
Jeng   OMGOMGOMGOM. its amazing. the colors and reflectio...   Dec 16 2006, 02:24 PM
moorepocket*   the colors are awesome.   Dec 16 2006, 08:17 PM
zebzie   :d why thanks   Dec 16 2006, 08:18 PM
zebzie   Bumping this, I spent a lot of time on this, and I...   Dec 19 2006, 05:27 AM
fallingstar   why, it's magnificent! :] i love the colo...   Dec 19 2006, 02:05 PM
triskitt   the colors are really cool!   Dec 20 2006, 04:34 PM
DrNick311   Here's some constructive advice (and a few per...   Dec 22 2006, 12:28 AM
zebzie   QUOTE(DrNick311 @ Dec 22 2006, 4:28 PM) H...   Dec 22 2006, 04:26 AM
x1227x   WOAH! i love it. the colors & the sparkles...   Dec 22 2006, 03:22 AM
IVIike   sweet! i love it   Dec 25 2006, 01:57 PM
Feathers   can i make it my desktop. its beautiful   Dec 25 2006, 01:59 PM


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