Progressional, like 90%? Options

[Gypsy Eyes]

So I won't have time to finish this tonight, but I'd like some critique on it. It's for a college application portfolio so be as harsh as you want, I need it.

It's like 180 layers so far? I don't know, I've merged a few.

Please note:
- The eyes, eyebrows, hair and jacket aren't finished
- Neither is the background.

[Stefanny]

I LOVE how the eyes and lips "pop." [:

I do have some constructive criticism though;
- There's a darker part of the lips (around the middle) that should be blended into the lighter colors better.
- The skin color looks a bit silver to me (it might just be me) and should be toned into a more peach or brownish color.
- Either the right nostril has to be enlarged and rounded or the left nostril has to be made smaller and flatten a bit, because they don't quite "match each other."
- Part of the eyelashes don't quite touch the eye enough (mostly around the inside edges)
- Don't forget the ears XD

On the right side, the hair's a bit lumpy. Care to explain why, because I know you didn't do that on accident. Don't take this comment the wrong way, I just wanted to understand that side of the hair :]

Just a suggestion:
I don't know if it would, but the hair might look better if it was a little longer to the neck, curling out at the ends?

Then again, I'm not proffessional like you. I just wanted to tell you a common person's view on this.