College Essay, is it good? |
College Essay, is it good? |
Oct 10 2006, 07:53 AM
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CHYEAAHHH MAN ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,255 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 168,013 |
I have finished my college essay and was wondering if anyone could give me any suggestions or tips to making it better. A lot of the colleges topics are "What is an achievement that you are most proud of and why?" and I used a past experience to talk about how my (nonexistant) leadership skills are amazing.
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Oct 11 2006, 06:04 PM
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I reckon... for my final english essay I jocked other peoples stuff that they posted on the internet for critiquing
I say take it down and give it to an English Teacher... or a friend... |
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Lo Mein College Essay Oct 10 2006, 07:53 AM
funk.this Um. I'm not going to critique your essay, but... Oct 11 2006, 04:49 PM
Statues/Shadows ^are you serious..?
I don't feel like reading... Oct 11 2006, 10:55 PM
Lo Mein Haha ok maybe it wasn't the brightest idea. Ta... Oct 12 2006, 06:32 PM![]() ![]() |