College Essay, is it good? |
 Oct 10 2006, 07:53 AM
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CHYEAAHHH MAN  Group: Member Posts: 1,255 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 168,013  |
I have finished my college essay and was wondering if anyone could give me any suggestions or tips to making it better. A lot of the colleges topics are "What is an achievement that you are most proud of and why?" and I used a past experience to talk about how my (nonexistant) leadership skills are amazing.
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Oct 11 2006, 04:49 PM
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te quiero Group: Banned Posts: 472 Joined: Sep 2006 Member No: 467,840 |
Um. I'm not going to critique your essay, but I will tell you this:
Posting up your college app essay online is a bad, bad, bad, bad, bad idea. If you want somebody to read it, go to your english teacher or your parents or even a close friend. |
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Lo Mein College Essay Oct 10 2006, 07:53 AM
.fire I reckon... for my final english essay I jocked ot... Oct 11 2006, 06:04 PM Statues/Shadows ^are you serious..?
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Lo Mein Haha ok maybe it wasn't the brightest idea. Ta... Oct 12 2006, 06:32 PM |
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