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Unfinish Drawing
xtrancie
post Sep 17 2006, 10:18 PM
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This is unfinish but can you guys tell me what you think? and like give me advice how to make it better. this is for an art competition XD. The Image is just your imagination of a lady O_O.

 
 
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KissMe2408
post Sep 18 2006, 02:28 PM
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Hey, this is looking great so far!
I would add more color, but don't go overboard. I like how your attention is first caught on her eye and the colors around it. That is a nice focal point, keep it like that. I agree with Mona on extending the red ribbon and defining her chin and jawline.

Maybe having flowing movements and lines, more ribbons if you like, at the bottom where the white space is. I think it would be nice to keep the eye moving for this piece. Perhaps accent her eyelashes a bit more, and blend.

=) Awesome job!
 

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x.d.o.0.f.u.s   Unfinish Drawing   Sep 17 2006, 10:18 PM
mona lisa   It's a very creative piece. I like your use of...   Sep 18 2006, 02:06 PM
KissMe2408   Hey, this is looking great so far! I would add...   Sep 18 2006, 02:28 PM
yrrnotelekktric   it`s really nice, i love the color schemes. i ...   Sep 24 2006, 02:39 AM
This Confession   Woah, I love the colors. Very nice. Pretty too. I...   Sep 24 2006, 08:43 PM


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