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Jack Bauer, new layout concept
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post Sep 13 2006, 10:06 AM
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Not quite sure whether or not this is goign to be a Xanga, Myspace, or Web layout... but, here it is in it's infancy.

I'm not done yet... by far. I know a few people who are REALLY going to like this *cough Kristina cough Krista*


//edit: Kay, it's done - http://www.createblog.com/layouts/preview.php?id=14471
 
 
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post Sep 13 2006, 04:52 PM
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I only found a few things to touch up on.

If you know how to change and use color balance, try using it. His skin colour is all over the place, and especially because it is a "simple" layout, it stand out (see the icon-like things on the right, compared to his skin colour on the left). I don't really know about that scribby grey stuff behind him on the left either x_x I think it's perhaps the picture on the left is so large, it stands out more.

I liked the brushes you used behind the icon looking things on the right though. And I also liked your font choices. I wish you'd used a bit more color with the brushes though... besides black. It's a bit too much against the plain white background.

Overall, it's alright though. I would probably try snazzy up the coding if you don't plan on really editing anything else in the graphic.
 

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digital.fragrance   Jack Bauer   Sep 13 2006, 10:06 AM
beach.   awesome it looks really cool!   Sep 13 2006, 10:34 AM
digital.fragrance   ^ Thank ya! I just decided to make it a websi...   Sep 13 2006, 12:10 PM
StanleyThePanda   haha you, kristina, and krista... This whole Jack ...   Sep 13 2006, 12:19 PM
Jeng   pretty awesome. good job   Sep 13 2006, 02:04 PM
This Confession   Oh man, Racheal I think that looks incredibly awes...   Sep 13 2006, 03:53 PM
Mooka009   I only found a few things to touch up on. If you ...   Sep 13 2006, 04:52 PM
kayceeisms   JACK BAUER! It's great, of course.   Sep 13 2006, 06:30 PM
Sakura.   of COURSE i love it rachael! I love that pic...   Sep 14 2006, 06:50 PM
digital.fragrance   ^ I knew you'd like it! (hmmm.... I wonde...   Sep 14 2006, 06:55 PM
Gypsy Eyes   I love it! Maybe add a slight texture to the...   Sep 15 2006, 01:49 PM
xbabyboo   woah.thats nice =]   Sep 17 2006, 02:05 PM


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