"Sometimes I", Felt sad today |
"Sometimes I", Felt sad today |
| *T0rmented_Soul* |
Aug 5 2006, 03:07 PM
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Sometimes I feel like I have nothing to give
worthless and unprecious of this life I live Sometimes I feel like no one really cares all by myself with out anyone there Sometimes I feel like I carry everything on these shoulders to prove my existence only to become stronger Sometimes I feel like Im being stared down scolded like a dog who cries and frowns Just one look, Just one smile everything in my life will finally be worth while Take me away, Take me far to heal my pain inflicted by these scars Sometimes I feel like I've never been loved cursed aside by the ones I couldn think of Sometimes I feel as if everything ends alongside my life with these feelings I cant Mend Sometimes I feel like I Just want to die drowning myself in these tears I'll cry Sometimes I feel this ache in my heart torn deep inside as it breaks me apart Just one look, Just one smile everything in my life will finally be worth while Take me away, Take me far to heal my pain inflicted by these scars |
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| *T0rmented_Soul* |
Aug 6 2006, 02:45 AM
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lol thnx Jesus I had alot of practice ever since I joined 2 years ago i spent my whole time in this forum and posted topics I wrote so it kinda became a habit of writing things really quick
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T0rmented_Soul "Sometimes I" Aug 5 2006, 03:07 PM
Just2Fresh I can relate. Nice. Aug 5 2006, 03:14 PM
T0rmented_Soul thnx .. Felt a little resentment today and made th... Aug 5 2006, 03:17 PM
Just2Fresh Wow. Hmm mind if i use a few of those lines in a s... Aug 5 2006, 03:20 PM
T0rmented_Soul be my guest go ahead Aug 5 2006, 03:21 PM
Just2Fresh Thank you thank you. Aug 5 2006, 03:41 PM
Spiritual Winged Aura QUOTESometimes I feel like I've never been lov... Aug 6 2006, 02:38 AM
T0rmented_Soul thnx bro I'm surprised on how my own work touc... Aug 6 2006, 02:41 AM
Arjuna Capulong That's some good stuff Mike.
Only 5 minutes? P... Aug 6 2006, 02:43 AM
aubbob. aww it made me cry
very deep and moving. Aug 6 2006, 03:03 AM
T0rmented_Soul thank you everyone makes me in the mood for writi... Aug 6 2006, 03:06 AM
Just2Fresh My girlfriend read it, i sent it to her through ai... Aug 6 2006, 12:53 PM
T0rmented_Soul ^ lol thnx bro I appreciate it. Aug 6 2006, 01:31 PM
LaStiNg4EtErNiTy nice poem. exactly how i feel right now. :(
if on... Aug 15 2006, 01:14 AM
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