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"Sometimes I", Felt sad today
*T0rmented_Soul*
post Aug 5 2006, 03:07 PM
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Sometimes I feel like I have nothing to give
worthless and unprecious of this life I live
Sometimes I feel like no one really cares
all by myself with out anyone there

Sometimes I feel like I carry everything on these shoulders
to prove my existence only to become stronger
Sometimes I feel like Im being stared down
scolded like a dog who cries and frowns

Just one look, Just one smile
everything in my life will finally be worth while
Take me away, Take me far
to heal my pain inflicted by these scars

Sometimes I feel like I've never been loved
cursed aside by the ones I couldn think of
Sometimes I feel as if everything ends
alongside my life with these feelings I cant Mend

Sometimes I feel like I Just want to die
drowning myself in these tears I'll cry
Sometimes I feel this ache in my heart
torn deep inside as it breaks me apart

Just one look, Just one smile
everything in my life will finally be worth while
Take me away, Take me far
to heal my pain inflicted by these scars
 
 
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*T0rmented_Soul*
post Aug 6 2006, 02:45 AM
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lol thnx Jesus I had alot of practice ever since I joined 2 years ago i spent my whole time in this forum and posted topics I wrote so it kinda became a habit of writing things really quick
 

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T0rmented_Soul   "Sometimes I"   Aug 5 2006, 03:07 PM
Just2Fresh   I can relate. Nice.   Aug 5 2006, 03:14 PM
T0rmented_Soul   thnx .. Felt a little resentment today and made th...   Aug 5 2006, 03:17 PM
Just2Fresh   Wow. Hmm mind if i use a few of those lines in a s...   Aug 5 2006, 03:20 PM
T0rmented_Soul   be my guest go ahead   Aug 5 2006, 03:21 PM
Just2Fresh   Thank you thank you.   Aug 5 2006, 03:41 PM
Spiritual Winged Aura   QUOTESometimes I feel like I've never been lov...   Aug 6 2006, 02:38 AM
T0rmented_Soul   thnx bro I'm surprised on how my own work touc...   Aug 6 2006, 02:41 AM
Arjuna Capulong   That's some good stuff Mike. Only 5 minutes? P...   Aug 6 2006, 02:43 AM
T0rmented_Soul   lol thnx Jesus I had alot of practice ever since I...   Aug 6 2006, 02:45 AM
aubbob.   aww it made me cry very deep and moving.   Aug 6 2006, 03:03 AM
T0rmented_Soul   thank you everyone makes me in the mood for writi...   Aug 6 2006, 03:06 AM
Just2Fresh   My girlfriend read it, i sent it to her through ai...   Aug 6 2006, 12:53 PM
T0rmented_Soul   ^ lol thnx bro I appreciate it.   Aug 6 2006, 01:31 PM
LaStiNg4EtErNiTy   nice poem. exactly how i feel right now. :( if on...   Aug 15 2006, 01:14 AM
T0rmented_Soul   gyea right on   Sep 5 2006, 12:26 PM


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