Watcha think of this manga i drew xD Options

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xD her hair is suposed to be covering her eyes xD!

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It looks good, but you need to work on depth perception. The image looks very flat... I'm not saying it's bad, and I think you have some real talent. You should practice on putting things into perspective. Use rag dolls when you create a manga image. Using rage dolls, and practice wth rag dolls will allow you to produce more 3dimensional pictures and become better at drawing in general. Depth perception is very important when bringing your artwork to life. I'll give you an example and I'll tell you how to work on the illusion of 3d.

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Rag-doll


here is a manga that I'm working on...

-work on body preportions (there are some really good "How to Draw Manga" books for this)
-practice shading to give your characters depth
-Try drawing from different angles (Your picture is a 3/4's view)
-PRATICE RAG-DOLLS!!!!!! It may seem un-important, but I assure you... drawing a ruff sketch with a rag doll can meanthe difference between a good or bad preportions.'

You have great stuff, I think you have portential... don't think I'm wringing you out... I know my stuff isn't perfect, and I only want you to become better at drawing the things you like to draw.