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Jul 28 2006, 08:45 AM
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Jul 29 2006, 01:06 PM
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everything is just too bold
the text is too huge and unreadable and there wasn't alot of thought put into the brushes and their placement Personally, I think you should use a lighter color for the brushes. They shouldn't be the main part of your peice since they are part of the background. I would also rethink the type of brushes you used. Also make the font different or smaller. It would be cool if you put "rits" somewhere on the picture, then added paint splatters and paintmarks of different colors splashing out from behind it |
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lumpy taking my time Jul 28 2006, 08:45 AM
Uronacid I think you should center it, and make the white l... Jul 28 2006, 01:09 PM
toyo loco I pretty much agree. For the white lines/brush you... Jul 28 2006, 01:32 PM
xbabyboo I think you should add less lines on the left and ... Jul 28 2006, 02:05 PM
Jeng i agreee with all, toattally agree on all. look ok... Jul 28 2006, 06:58 PM
ZapatoDelFuego Um... the text is reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeealy hard to r... Jul 29 2006, 01:27 AM
lumpy yeah kinda like a patch or something. idk what the... Jul 29 2006, 12:29 PM![]() ![]() |