Shine for me, Poem made by me [Critics] |
 May 29 2004, 06:45 PM
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 Look its...  Group: Official Member Posts: 5,817 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,767  |
i made this poem formy reading class andig ot the pic off the internet.
what do you think of it?  I made the sun represent God |
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May 29 2004, 06:47 PM
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 durian Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 13,124 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,860 |
I think it's sweet but I think I'll move this to writing. Cool poem the picture's cool too =P
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LatinaLady Shine for me May 29 2004, 06:45 PM
LatinaLady thankz i didnt know we had a writing forum *slow... May 29 2004, 07:14 PM |
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