The Wrong Blues, criticism? |
 Jul 6 2006, 08:24 PM
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 daughter of sin  Group: Member Posts: 1,653 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,134  |
Breathe in and out.
I see you at the piano, playing the blues, though the wrong blues.. for dreams cannot be easily altered, even after consideration. Now all this contention continues to destroy the air. You press the right chords, the right amount of sound, yet it's still the wrong blues. Fidelity and perception have gone in the wrong direction, informally. And my green make-up still abides on me. |
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Jul 7 2006, 02:48 PM
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 ...who created this mess...? Group: Member Posts: 451 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 97,244 |
Yeah, it is vague, but I think that's what makes it deep.
QUOTE Fidelity and perception have gone in the wrong direction, informally. ^ That part is the best; it made me pause to think about it for a moment. |
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Angelina Taylor The Wrong Blues Jul 6 2006, 08:24 PM
agirlnamed_aly It's interesting, but forms a very vague pictu... Jul 7 2006, 05:36 AM
Angelina Taylor QUOTE(agirlnamed_aly @ Jul 7 2006, 6:36 A... Jul 7 2006, 11:24 AM |
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