The Wrong Blues, criticism? |
 Jul 6 2006, 08:24 PM
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 daughter of sin  Group: Member Posts: 1,653 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,134  |
Breathe in and out.
I see you at the piano, playing the blues, though the wrong blues.. for dreams cannot be easily altered, even after consideration. Now all this contention continues to destroy the air. You press the right chords, the right amount of sound, yet it's still the wrong blues. Fidelity and perception have gone in the wrong direction, informally. And my green make-up still abides on me. |
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Jul 7 2006, 05:36 AM
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 I'd rather make mistakes than break. Group: Member Posts: 121 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 117,869 |
It's interesting, but forms a very vague picture that fails to leave a real impression.
Uh, but great word choice! |
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Angelina Taylor The Wrong Blues Jul 6 2006, 08:24 PM
Angelina Taylor QUOTE(agirlnamed_aly @ Jul 7 2006, 6:36 A... Jul 7 2006, 11:24 AM xblueradiance Yeah, it is vague, but I think that's what mak... Jul 7 2006, 02:48 PM |
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