Haiku, post them up! |
| *NatiMarie* |
 May 17 2004, 06:03 PM
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Post up some of your haikus so that everyone can see them. They can be about whatever you want (keep them clean please, PG-13).
 Just in case you don't know what a Haiku is, it's common format consist of a poem that has 5 syllables in first line, 7 syllables the second, and 5 syllables the third. Here's an example one that I wrote a couple of months ago (it's longer, well it's not a Haiku, just a combination of three.): Breaking Loose by NatiMarie Trembling silence Fear of breaking the tether My inwardness lives Botheration kills Cringing while venerating Sluing in my pit Binging fearfulness Terminating hope, now gone Accruing demise |
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May 29 2004, 12:05 PM
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 fell in love with a boy  Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
Here's this one:
Mowed the lawn today It was my first time to sweat In a long time, sad OOOOOOOOOOOOH! You Point Your Finger I'd like to bite it off now Why Are You So Rude? Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz. Whasa thisa? I need a kleenex Runny nose and tears From you after years |
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NatiMarie Haiku May 17 2004, 06:03 PM
CEP ^ Yeah, I wrote a poem like that expecting it was ... May 17 2004, 06:56 PM Kathleen I like, Jose. Hmm...I should make one up right now... May 17 2004, 07:14 PM EmeraldKnight First one:
Why can't you see
The painful tear... May 17 2004, 10:26 PM sharpieaddicteD i have one! haha it was stupid it was when i w... May 27 2004, 09:15 PM angel-roh mine is realllie weird and it might not make any s... May 28 2004, 04:07 AM ryfitaDF fourty-five houses
none of them have seen a day
ta... May 29 2004, 02:28 AM angel-roh haha that ones funny, ryfitaDF
mathiew is a jerk
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LatinaLady those are cool. i some how findit hard to make my ... May 29 2004, 07:18 PM |
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