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Screams From Hell
Dark's Angel
post Jun 27 2006, 11:11 AM
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Screaming rings in the corridors of my mind.
I can't seem to make it stop.
It's filled with pain,
Remorse and guilt,
But most of all,
It's mixed with sadness and hate.
I hate every thing that's happened to me.
But there's nothing that
I can't do about the past.
All I can try to hope for is
A better future
One that isn't filled with pain.
I'm writhing in anger that's mixed with pain,
No one even cares that I'm alive.
Here on Earth,
I know that its not possible
To be saved from this desolate hell,
It's already sucked me in,
And it's working its horrors upon me.
Nothing can save me now.
 
 
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magicfann
post Jul 4 2006, 02:03 AM
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You are emo.
 
Dark's Angel
post Jul 4 2006, 03:48 PM
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QUOTE(magicfann @ Jul 4 2006, 3:03 AM) *
You are emo.


Meh, I really wouldn't be considered that...Not to myself or my friends at all. I have emotions and all, but a lot of times I get pretty emotionless too...Its more of a nothingness sometimes...(Heh, not a word that I use...but it fits...) that I seem to feel and I often draw it out through my poetry..

This one really was more of a scentence structure from the beginning, it really never had any rhyme to it...But I saw that it had a certain thing that ost of my poems had to it when I wrote it and ah well...

Oh and if you really want to know Kathleen...I'm 16.
 

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