Screams From Hell |
 Jun 27 2006, 11:11 AM
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 Koorime  Group: Member Posts: 153 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 237,135  |
Screaming rings in the corridors of my mind.
I can't seem to make it stop. It's filled with pain, Remorse and guilt, But most of all, It's mixed with sadness and hate. I hate every thing that's happened to me. But there's nothing that I can't do about the past. All I can try to hope for is A better future One that isn't filled with pain. I'm writhing in anger that's mixed with pain, No one even cares that I'm alive. Here on Earth, I know that its not possible To be saved from this desolate hell, It's already sucked me in, And it's working its horrors upon me. Nothing can save me now. |
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| *Kathleen* |
Jul 4 2006, 02:41 AM
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MY GOD WHAT THE FCUK IS WRONG WITH BEING AN ACTUAL HUMAN BEING THAT HAS EMOTIONS?
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Jul 4 2006, 10:43 AM
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 daughter of sin Group: Member Posts: 1,653 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,134 |
QUOTE(Kathleen @ Jul 4 2006, 3:41 AM)  MY GOD WHAT THE FCUK IS WRONG WITH BEING AN ACTUAL HUMAN BEING THAT HAS EMOTIONS? I'll second that. And I agree with Paradox of Life. Try not to structure your lines like sentences.. don't be afraid to be more creative. Experiment with words. |
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Dark's Angel Screams From Hell Jun 27 2006, 11:11 AM
Kathleen I enjoy reading your style of poetry, as well as t... Jul 2 2006, 02:57 AM Paradox of Life QUOTEBut there's nothing that
I can't do a... Jul 2 2006, 09:37 AM magicfann You are emo. Jul 4 2006, 02:03 AM
Dark's Angel QUOTE(magicfann @ Jul 4 2006, 3:03 AM) Yo... Jul 4 2006, 03:48 PM |
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