LOL LIFE SUCKS, POEM #3 |
 Jun 30 2006, 01:13 PM
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POWAPOSTA  Group: Member Posts: 3,169 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 30,725  |
My Poem about the illusion of life:
Vast figures in a far away appearance Scattered letters and broken breath mints Uncertainty with my insecurity Why wont my love see About this false poornosss and reality Endless pit of stale fruit snacks Nothing in life is beautiful When all is a dream |
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Jul 4 2006, 08:31 AM
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 yan lin♥ Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 14,129 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,627 |
^ Please, don't spam.
Somehow, your poem comes off a bit shallow. |
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airam LOL LIFE SUCKS Jun 30 2006, 01:13 PM
Kathleen And what a tragic, depressing life you must live. ... Jul 2 2006, 02:50 AM Paradox of Life Touching. Jul 2 2006, 09:38 AM airam I HATE STALE FRUIT SNACKS Jul 2 2006, 09:29 PM Kathleen A tad? Mmm this entire forum is becoming more sha... Jul 5 2006, 02:24 AM
airam lol when i posted this on my fake xanga (XMACENCI... Jul 7 2006, 11:03 AM |
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