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Haiku, post them up!
*NatiMarie*
post May 17 2004, 06:03 PM
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Post up some of your haikus so that everyone can see them. They can be about whatever you want (keep them clean please, PG-13).

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Just in case you don't know what a Haiku is, it's common format consist of a poem that has 5 syllables in first line, 7 syllables the second, and 5 syllables the third. Here's an example one that I wrote a couple of months ago (it's longer, well it's not a Haiku, just a combination of three.):

Breaking Loose
by NatiMarie

Trembling silence
Fear of breaking the tether
My inwardness lives

Botheration kills
Cringing while venerating
Sluing in my pit

Binging fearfulness
Terminating hope, now gone
Accruing demise
 
 
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post May 29 2004, 02:28 AM
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fourty-five houses
none of them have seen a day
take that, GW

nerd day is a sham
descrimination is bad
i love nerds so much!

children laugh at jokes
but not at the ones i tell
stupid kids should die

party at nikki's
don't forget t bring the booze
Xs on my hands

on the carpet in
andrews room their is dried up
puke from two weeks past

mathiew is a jerk
and he thinks he is so cool
he peed on the couch

my back is itchy
i will scratch it with a knife
hey my blood is red

i just made all those up. am i good or what?
 

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