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post Jun 22 2006, 08:37 PM
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post Jun 22 2006, 11:01 PM
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I'm sry in advance for the critism. but this needs some work..
I know you had good intentions but the random brushes arent working for me. The cut out of the image is smooth except, as Ada^ said, you can still see white from the original pic. Maybe if you had a white bg instead of a black background.. it would look neater. The brushes are random as marzipan said. The colors are nausiating. We are not 5, the green and purple ninja turtle colors just clash, majorly. And how does that match the image? The brushes dont even match eachouther. Hearts then spikes, then stars then music notes then x's ?!

I suggest changing the background to white. Download some decent brushes that match eachother then start again. The brushes should never be the main part of your piece. Make a blend or something, then add brushes to enhance the blend and make it look special.
 
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post Jun 23 2006, 11:48 AM
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QUOTE(mizz_americaz @ Jun 22 2006, 10:01 PM) *
I'm sry in advance for the critism. but this needs some work..
I know you had good intentions but the random brushes arent working for me. The cut out of the image is smooth except, as Ada^ said, you can still see white from the original pic. Maybe if you had a white bg instead of a black background.. it would look neater. The brushes are random as marzipan said. The colors are nausiating. We are not 5, the green and purple ninja turtle colors just clash, majorly. And how does that match the image? The brushes dont even match eachouther. Hearts then spikes, then stars then music notes then x's ?!

I suggest changing the background to white. Download some decent brushes that match eachother then start again. The brushes should never be the main part of your piece. Make a blend or something, then add brushes to enhance the blend and make it look special.

I totally agree with Maryland. This peice should be about your work. Not somebody's brushes that you found on someones site. The white around the hair and in other places makes the image looked rushed and it downgrades the whole image.
You should use a white background and colors that don't clash so much. And carefully plan out your brushes. I know the effect you were going for, but that effect makes the image look like a beginer's work. Also, more than one image would make this image look better, too.
 

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