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Haiku, post them up!
*NatiMarie*
post May 17 2004, 06:03 PM
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Post up some of your haikus so that everyone can see them. They can be about whatever you want (keep them clean please, PG-13).

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Just in case you don't know what a Haiku is, it's common format consist of a poem that has 5 syllables in first line, 7 syllables the second, and 5 syllables the third. Here's an example one that I wrote a couple of months ago (it's longer, well it's not a Haiku, just a combination of three.):

Breaking Loose
by NatiMarie

Trembling silence
Fear of breaking the tether
My inwardness lives

Botheration kills
Cringing while venerating
Sluing in my pit

Binging fearfulness
Terminating hope, now gone
Accruing demise
 
 
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angel-roh
post May 28 2004, 04:07 AM
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mine is realllie weird and it might not make any sense cus i dont got the mood to think lols haha

you are so stupid
because i really hate you
and you are dummy


hahahaha... sorry for the dumb haiku haha

hmm another one

you are cute and i...
i like you like you like me
cus i reallie do
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i know thats soo weird hahaha
 

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