Poems for all the CB writers Options

[AzN_AssAul'][']

For the poet in us all. Dunno if this is the right place for the thread, but here ya go. Feel free to post your poetry... And be open to criticism (hopefully constructive!). Here's one of mine...
Hope you like it. And give some cc plz...Ty

Moral Anaesthesia

We were always barred behind
each other's private walls;
with miles of air and oceanic mass,
words unspoken behind bullet-proof glass.
Helpless and stuck in a mere illusion,
a fleeting moment past much too soon;
the promise of God to a fool,
beauty too pure to ever be true.

I bite my lip as
I kiss you goodbye,
try to look away when
my love flies by.

I bite my lip and
repeat the old lie,
try to look away 'cause
boys
don't
cry.

Tonight you tore down all dreams
built with white lies and deceit.
Where I once stood comfortably numb,
I weep and rot deaf, blind and dumb;
Feast in misery like cheap red wine,
the easiest substitute for the truth.
Moral anaesthesia, morphine for the soul -
the price you pay, for losing control.

I bite my lip as
I kiss you goodbye,
try to look away when
my love flies by.

I bite my lip and
repeat the old lie,
try to look away 'cause
boys
don't
cry.

[XaZnX07]

and another one

If ther were no words
If there were no ways talk
I would still hear you
If there were no tears
No way to feel inside
I'd still feel for you...

And even if the sun refused to shine
Even if romance ran out of rhyme
You would still have my heart and u would be my sun shine until the very end of time
You're all I need and the only one i need

All of my life
I have been waiting for the right person and now i have found u
You've opened my eyes
And showed me how to love with out having physical contact, unselfishly, and patiently....
I've dreamed of this a thousand times before
But in my dreams I couldn't love you more

just one day i hope u will return the love i have
I will give you my heart my everything
Until the very end of time...
You're all I need and the only one i need
think i am falling in love with u beautiful