Poems for all the CB writers Options

[AzN_AssAul'][']

For the poet in us all. Dunno if this is the right place for the thread, but here ya go. Feel free to post your poetry... And be open to criticism (hopefully constructive!). Here's one of mine...
Hope you like it. And give some cc plz...Ty

Moral Anaesthesia

We were always barred behind
each other's private walls;
with miles of air and oceanic mass,
words unspoken behind bullet-proof glass.
Helpless and stuck in a mere illusion,
a fleeting moment past much too soon;
the promise of God to a fool,
beauty too pure to ever be true.

I bite my lip as
I kiss you goodbye,
try to look away when
my love flies by.

I bite my lip and
repeat the old lie,
try to look away 'cause
boys
don't
cry.

Tonight you tore down all dreams
built with white lies and deceit.
Where I once stood comfortably numb,
I weep and rot deaf, blind and dumb;
Feast in misery like cheap red wine,
the easiest substitute for the truth.
Moral anaesthesia, morphine for the soul -
the price you pay, for losing control.

I bite my lip as
I kiss you goodbye,
try to look away when
my love flies by.

I bite my lip and
repeat the old lie,
try to look away 'cause
boys
don't
cry.

[XaZnX07]

heres another one i wrote



SITTING HERE THINKING OF YOU
ALL THAT IS GOING THROUGH MY MIND IS THAT I LOVE U SO MUCH SAYING I LOVE U ISNT EVEN ENOUGH BECAUSE MY LOVE FOR U IS SO STRONG

I DREAM OF YOU IN MY ARMS BUT THAN I REALIZE IT CANT BE DONE NOW, SO I SIT HERE ALONE THINKING IN PAIN HOW MUCH I NEED THIS GIRL BUT I CANT HAVE HER YET

I THINK TO MY SELF HOW MUCH LONGER I MUST WAIT IN PAIN BUT YET HAPPY AT THE SAME TIME IS IT WORTH TO BE WAITING IN PAIN FOR THE TIME TO PAST KNOWING THAT IN THE END WE MIGHT BE TOGETHER?

TO ME ITS WORTH IT EVEN THOUGH IN PAIN RIGHT NOW ITS WORTH TO WAIT FOR THE GIRL OF MY DREAMS AND SOMETHING VERY SPECIAL WE CAN SHARE

I REALLY DO LOVE HER WITH EVERYTHING I GOT

SO I WILL WAIT IN PAIN FOR MANY YEARS TO COME

I THINK TO MY SELF WILL SURVIVE THESE 3 YEARS WITH PAIN YES I CAN, THE LOVE I HAVE FOR YOU WILL NOURISH AND KEEP ME LIVING, IN PAIN BUT YET HAPPY AT THE SAME TIME

I NEED YOU AND NO ONE ELSE TO LOVE ME

I HOPE YOU UNDERSTAND WHAT I AM TRYING TO SAY.....