Poems for all the CB writers |
Poems for all the CB writers |
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<--asdoua hfkawhekf ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 40 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 10,373 ![]() |
For the poet in us all. Dunno if this is the right place for the thread, but here ya go. Feel free to post your poetry... And be open to criticism (hopefully constructive!). Here's one of mine...
Hope you like it. And give some cc plz...Ty Moral Anaesthesia We were always barred behind each other's private walls; with miles of air and oceanic mass, words unspoken behind bullet-proof glass. Helpless and stuck in a mere illusion, a fleeting moment past much too soon; the promise of God to a fool, beauty too pure to ever be true. I bite my lip as I kiss you goodbye, try to look away when my love flies by. I bite my lip and repeat the old lie, try to look away 'cause boys don't cry. Tonight you tore down all dreams built with white lies and deceit. Where I once stood comfortably numb, I weep and rot deaf, blind and dumb; Feast in misery like cheap red wine, the easiest substitute for the truth. Moral anaesthesia, morphine for the soul - the price you pay, for losing control. I bite my lip as I kiss you goodbye, try to look away when my love flies by. I bite my lip and repeat the old lie, try to look away 'cause boys don't cry. |
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i never knew i could rite poems untill i fell in love... some poems i wrote for this girl..............
TODAY I SAW A GIRL WOW SHE IS BEAUTIFUL I GOT TO KNOW HER NAME AND WE BECAME GOOD FRIENDS BUT .... SOMETHING HAPPEN ..... BEAUTIFUL I SAW U TODAY I WAS STANDING NEXT TO YOU ... I WAS JUST THINKING AT THAT MOMENT I WANTED TO SAY HI TO U BUT SOMETHING MADE ME BACK OFF BEAUTIFUL I SAW YOU TODAY JUST AS BEFORE, STANDING NEXT TO YOU THINKING BOY I WISH I COULD HOLD YOUR HAND BEAUTIFUL I SAW YOU TODAY AGAIN. I WAS STANDING NEXT TO YOU YET IT FELT LIKE I WAS A BILLION MILES AWAY FROM YOU, WISHING I COULD JUST GRAB YOU AND HOLD YOU TIGHT IN MY ARMS BEAUTIFUL I SAW YOU TODAY BUT THIS TIME I FELT LIKE I JUST WANTED TO KISS YOU AND HOLD YOU FOR EVA IN MY ARMS BEAUTIFUL TODAY I SAW YOU AGAIN LOOKING BEAUTIFUL THAN EVA LIKE YOU ALWAYS DO, TODAY IS DIFFERENT SOMETHING SO SPECIAL I THOUGHT I COULDNT OF KNOWN WHAT IT IS AT THIS YOUNG AGE BUT I CAME REALIZE I WANTED TO LET YOU KNOW THAT I HAVE FALLEN FOR YOU NOT A DAY THAT PAST THAT I DONT LOOK AT YOUR BEAUTIFUL FACE OR HEAR YOUR SWEET VOICE EVERY DAY THAT PAST MY LOVE FOR YOU GROWS AND GROWS AND MY LOVE FOR YOU BEAUTIFUL WILL NEVA STOP GROWING YOU HAVE TRIPED ME AND I HAVE FALLEN FOR YOU GIRL |
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