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kimmytree
post Jun 15 2006, 01:16 AM
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Beach image is from sxc... and was majorly edited. I made the paper pattern.

This was my first time using layers. Nothing special, but I think its decent for my first try.

Any comments or suggestions would be greatly appreciated. Critizism really really helps me improve. happy.gif

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[edit] I think I should slice it and save it in the png format... because its a little blurry.
 
 
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xCorporation
post Jun 15 2006, 03:31 AM
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First time working with a DIV huh? Good job. but just so you know, DIVS are for kids biggrin.gif
but anyways, let me critique you!

first the colors are a good match. however they can be VERY and i mean VERY bright for another persons screen. i have a lap top so i can swivel the screen and darken the colors so that i can see the layout. fix the color so that its not gonna blind someone elses eyes. cool.gif

I like the things that go on your navigation side. just give it a little more padding on the left so that its not completely on the edge of the yellow bg.

notice how you have a line that is about a few pixels to the left of the yellow navigation side -> well it would look better if you shift the entire thing so that it touches the line. at least it some what creates a border for the yellow left side. or else, just entirely remove that line because it looks off. but i notice how you're aiming for that paper/notebook theme.

tha layout it nice for a first timer. it just needs a little touch up. work on it wink.gif
 

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happykmd   Take Me Awaaaaay   Jun 15 2006, 01:16 AM
This Confession   *hits head on desk over and over* alllll your la...   Jun 15 2006, 03:22 AM
Mells-Star   Not Bad...Preety Nice but its to plain I think You...   Jun 15 2006, 03:24 AM
xCorporation   First time working with a DIV huh? Good job. but j...   Jun 15 2006, 03:31 AM
This Confession   ^ehm shes made a ton of div layouts. they just s...   Jun 15 2006, 03:35 AM
xCorporation   now i begin to wonder if my xcorp layout shows the...   Jun 15 2006, 03:37 AM
This Confession   ^haha actually it doesn't just you should hav...   Jun 15 2006, 03:39 AM
happykmd   Well, as far as I know, you're the only person...   Jun 15 2006, 10:00 AM
This Confession   well search around in other topics to fix it.. I ...   Jun 15 2006, 10:44 AM
happykmd   QUOTEFirst time working with a DIV huh? Good job. ...   Jun 16 2006, 12:20 AM


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