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 Jun 6 2006, 07:31 PM
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Memories forgotten eternally
As time numbers the days of the pure and evil Lost through happiness and despair They collide in the fragments of blissful days Brushing through jeweled nights When music gives serenity to the devastated A forgotten land Hidden away by flowers of life Concealing its beauty in a world So deceiving Letting time erase all image Of what was once and what was then Where the angels grace the gardens of heaven Ravens dance upon shadows as silhouettes of music Enlightening the crystal darkness of the night Each note bringing the fantasies of summer And the glamour of winter A memory so forgotten Concealed in a chapter Hidden in the gardens Never has the world Seen days entwined with happiness Or nights jeweled with elegance What a fascinating illusion An endless story kept in a single memory Embedded in the void of the forgotten ----- did it seem like I messed around with the vocabulary? If it's confusing it was supposed to be. My goal here was to describe something... undescribable. Hope you get it P.S: if you noticed it sounds like my other poem, Untitled Artwork, that's because when I was writing this, I was listening to the same song I listented to while writing Untitled Artwork. |
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Jun 14 2006, 11:57 AM
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Yen, That was wonderfull. You did such a good job! Keep it up! <3
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Blow_Don't_SUCK Lost Memory Jun 6 2006, 07:31 PM
x2xmhpm WOW..i have to say that this poem was just soo...b... Jun 13 2006, 05:09 PM
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