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triipinfserious
post May 24 2004, 08:22 PM
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i`m creatin` somethin` for my xanga; it`ll have the best original poetry, stories, songs, `nd or quotes that people i kno have made.

please post your best poem[s], song[s], story[ies]`nd or quote[s]

i will post the best ones i see on my xanga in june.

please post
1. your name
2. the title of your piece of work
3. what it is [i.e. poem or song or whatever]

thanks (=

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ryfitaDF
post May 26 2004, 10:16 PM
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this is a song i wrote about going through a haunted house. not, like, a real haunted house, but the kind where you pay for people to jump out at you and go BOO!!!

Lunchbox
Tremble
Song

DO you know the way to go?
The darkness tries to anti-guide you
Watch your step and watch your back
The monster’s lurking right behind you
Creatures hiss and fog appears
The only source of light is flickering
The distant sound is of chainsaws
The sound gets closer. Fog is thickening

Do ya know what it is to tremble?
All hope is lost and the terror sheer
Beware the belly of the beast
The belly of the beast
The beast feeds off your fear

DO you know the way to go
So the ghouls will never find you?
Try to hide from Frankenstein
And run away from Nosferatu
A MAZE with never ending walls
End up inside the screaming room
Where death is behind every face
and walls are dripping, drenched with doom

Do ya know what it is to tremble?
All hope is lost. The end is near
Beware the belly of the beast
The belly of the beast
The beast feeds off your fear

THROUGH THE DUNGEON YOU MUST GO
CAN YOU FIGURE YOUR WAY THROUGH?
DREAD AND YOU GO HAND IN HAND
AND TERROR IS IN LOVE…
WITH YOU!!!

Boo

Do ya know what it is to tremble?
Farewell to all that you hold dear
Beware the belly of the beast
The belly of the beast
The beast feeds off your fear X2
 

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triipinfserious   best writings   May 24 2004, 08:22 PM
ComradeRed   Name: Comrade Alexei Ivanovich Karasov (AKA The Ze...   May 24 2004, 08:33 PM
triipinfserious   wow that`s great but did you write that ? i ne...   May 24 2004, 08:35 PM
ComradeRed   QUOTE(triipinfserious @ May 24 2004, 8:35 PM)...   May 24 2004, 08:36 PM
triipinfserious   oh cool thanks (= i love it   May 24 2004, 08:37 PM
Kathleen   Heh...trust me, it's Minda...he wrote it, the ...   May 24 2004, 08:39 PM
triipinfserious   thanks kathleen; you got any work ?   May 24 2004, 08:40 PM
ComradeRed   QUOTE(triipinfserious @ May 24 2004, 8:40 PM)...   May 24 2004, 08:42 PM
pikimoo   I'd post but um.. You wouldn't like anythi...   May 24 2004, 08:48 PM
Sa-Chan   I would post some songs, or poetry, or short stori...   May 24 2004, 08:48 PM
triipinfserious   don`t worry post anythin` .. everythin...   May 24 2004, 08:49 PM
pikimoo   <.< >.> I'll post one.. but don...   May 24 2004, 08:55 PM
ComradeRed   How suicidal of you. I like it actually.   May 24 2004, 08:56 PM
Sa-Chan   By: Savannah To Damn Perfect- And when you lef...   May 24 2004, 09:03 PM
triipinfserious   iite thanks -- your name is ? oh nvm sorry i didn...   May 24 2004, 09:05 PM
pikimoo   Okay.. I just looked at your xanga. You and Long c...   May 24 2004, 09:05 PM
triipinfserious   [^^] haha is that a good thing ... oh yeah long do...   May 24 2004, 09:07 PM
Kathleen   Haha nice, Minda. Yeah, I have these...I can't...   May 24 2004, 09:12 PM
triipinfserious   thanks kathleen (= i took the top 2   May 24 2004, 09:16 PM
Kathleen   Hehe okay. Thanks.   May 24 2004, 09:25 PM
machinoman   VIOLENT NIGHT BY MICHAEL O'RILEY It was the l...   May 24 2004, 09:31 PM
pikimoo   lmao! That's vicious. I'm both Jewish ...   May 24 2004, 09:33 PM
machinoman   yeah no offense to anyone its just supposed to be ...   May 24 2004, 09:36 PM
triipinfserious   wow this is great (= keep it comin`   May 24 2004, 10:08 PM
pikimoo   I wanna see whatever it is that you're makin o...   May 25 2004, 12:53 AM
triipinfserious   i will it`s gunna be posted in june on my xang...   May 25 2004, 07:25 PM
o0h*s0o//d0rKaBlE   pOeM written by:me,Catherine Rochana K.(do you wan...   May 25 2004, 07:42 PM
triipinfserious   awhh that`s a swt poem   May 25 2004, 10:44 PM
ryfitaDF   lunchbox "the meaning of life" song In ...   May 25 2004, 11:21 PM
o0h*s0o//d0rKaBlE   QUOTE(triipinfserious @ May 25 2004, 10:44 PM...   May 26 2004, 11:03 AM
ComradeRed   What's with all the poetry no prose?   May 26 2004, 11:05 AM
triipinfserious   ryfitaDF what`s your name so i can put your cr...   May 26 2004, 07:33 PM
ryfitaDF   my real name is John but i like to be called Lunch...   May 26 2004, 09:45 PM
ryfitaDF   this is a song i wrote about going through a haun...   May 26 2004, 10:16 PM
RiddleMeWonders   Lindsey Kimbrow Three Poem; Published in the Poetr...   May 27 2004, 02:35 AM
RiddleMeWonders   Lindsey Kimbrow & Ashley Torbert (Untangible) ...   May 27 2004, 02:44 AM
triipinfserious   thnx (= i used your poem & quote   May 27 2004, 09:49 AM
Sa-Chan   Quotes: Things I've said in the past o_O By: S...   May 27 2004, 11:46 AM


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