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It was going to be perfect; the perfect murder
technicolour
post May 26 2006, 12:52 PM
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show me a garden thats bursting to life
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I still don't know if I like it.


lol it's thummbed..i thought it turned out all pixely again.

and AIRPLANE! is my design company simulation I had to do as a school project, and well, if I do go into graphic design as a career, and maybe start my own business that would be it.

I'll show ya'll the logo and everything business if you want...
 
 
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feferity
post May 28 2006, 11:52 PM
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je hebt het niveau van een poffertje
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good colouring, but I disagree about the use of the white splatter brushes. I just... really don't like them there. Maybe it's just those splatters in particular, but there are better splatter brushes out there. Try lowering the opacity so that it fits the vintage look of everything else.

I like the collage, it's nice that it's not extra large. I like where and how the text looks on "it was going to be perfect;..." Maybe try adding a discreet brown border around the image + blog, or atleast the image. I think it would look nicer.
 

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