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 May 27 2006, 11:42 PM
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 Mais je ne l'aime pas  Group: Member Posts: 971 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 108,135  |
I plan to make a layout out of this, but I feel like something's missing.
 I'm going for the simple, minimalist look. I don't know. What do you think? |
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May 28 2006, 01:17 PM
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 je hebt het niveau van een poffertje Group: Member Posts: 512 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,934 |
If you were trying for a simple, minimalist look, the brushes you chose are really not the ones you should have used. For one thing, those kind of brushes arent really "simple" and "minimalistic". The imagw quality is terrible. The pictures look a bit rough around the edges. The font for "decaelegance" is really pixelly, and why on earth is half of it under that box? Bring it on top. The image lying horizontally across the box could have some more cropping done to it. The two images with the tape on the corners looks tacky, and doesnt look good where it is.
Overall, when I look at this, it doesnt seem as though you spent long on it. It is possible to have a nice, simple, minimal layout, but it doesnt mean you don't spend lots of time on it either. Maybe this is a "work in progress" but so far, it's not good progress. I suggest you re-think some of the brush choices you made. It needs some work, but I'm sure you can do it. |
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towntown2 something's missing May 27 2006, 11:42 PM
Madame C It could use some more brushwork over top of the i... May 27 2006, 11:49 PM mizz_americaz The cutouts of the pictures need some serious reco... May 28 2006, 07:55 PM xbabyboo I don`t like how the pictures are cut.I think ... May 28 2006, 11:23 PM
Jeng i agree with everything monet said.its pretty simp... May 29 2006, 10:35 AM |
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