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triipinfserious
post May 24 2004, 08:22 PM
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i`m creatin` somethin` for my xanga; it`ll have the best original poetry, stories, songs, `nd or quotes that people i kno have made.

please post your best poem[s], song[s], story[ies]`nd or quote[s]

i will post the best ones i see on my xanga in june.

please post
1. your name
2. the title of your piece of work
3. what it is [i.e. poem or song or whatever]

thanks (=

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ryfitaDF
post May 25 2004, 11:21 PM
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"the meaning of life"
song

In beginning of day I see redness in sky
I just want to live and I just want to die
With a V on my back and a thorn in my heart
And your enemies asking to be ripped apart
It’s a teeter totter. It goes up and goes down
Just want to topple the burger king’s crown
Cause you’re against everything and you don’t give a s***
The only thing that you know is that it feels like it fits

I’m seeing red. I feel so blue
I need you now. Oh yeah? F*** you!
I hate your lies. I long for truth
When life’s this bored what can I do?

The savior is gone. Everything is a lie
I just want to live and I just want to die
I wanna take out my fit onto everybody
In this circular pit of miniature anarchy
God is mercy and I am without either
The only lesson I need is “The Promise of Fever”
I take the good with the bad and still wake up every day
It might look like I don’t, but I love it this way!

I’m seeing red. I feel so blue
Where were you when I needed you?
I hate your lies. I long for truth
I hate my life I love my cru!
I’m feeling bad. I want the truth
And with this s*** you put me through
I’ll take you down with claw and tooth
When life’s this bored what’s left to do?
 

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triipinfserious   best writings   May 24 2004, 08:22 PM
ComradeRed   Name: Comrade Alexei Ivanovich Karasov (AKA The Ze...   May 24 2004, 08:33 PM
triipinfserious   wow that`s great but did you write that ? i ne...   May 24 2004, 08:35 PM
ComradeRed   QUOTE(triipinfserious @ May 24 2004, 8:35 PM)...   May 24 2004, 08:36 PM
triipinfserious   oh cool thanks (= i love it   May 24 2004, 08:37 PM
Kathleen   Heh...trust me, it's Minda...he wrote it, the ...   May 24 2004, 08:39 PM
triipinfserious   thanks kathleen; you got any work ?   May 24 2004, 08:40 PM
ComradeRed   QUOTE(triipinfserious @ May 24 2004, 8:40 PM)...   May 24 2004, 08:42 PM
pikimoo   I'd post but um.. You wouldn't like anythi...   May 24 2004, 08:48 PM
Sa-Chan   I would post some songs, or poetry, or short stori...   May 24 2004, 08:48 PM
triipinfserious   don`t worry post anythin` .. everythin...   May 24 2004, 08:49 PM
pikimoo   <.< >.> I'll post one.. but don...   May 24 2004, 08:55 PM
ComradeRed   How suicidal of you. I like it actually.   May 24 2004, 08:56 PM
Sa-Chan   By: Savannah To Damn Perfect- And when you lef...   May 24 2004, 09:03 PM
triipinfserious   iite thanks -- your name is ? oh nvm sorry i didn...   May 24 2004, 09:05 PM
pikimoo   Okay.. I just looked at your xanga. You and Long c...   May 24 2004, 09:05 PM
triipinfserious   [^^] haha is that a good thing ... oh yeah long do...   May 24 2004, 09:07 PM
Kathleen   Haha nice, Minda. Yeah, I have these...I can't...   May 24 2004, 09:12 PM
triipinfserious   thanks kathleen (= i took the top 2   May 24 2004, 09:16 PM
Kathleen   Hehe okay. Thanks.   May 24 2004, 09:25 PM
machinoman   VIOLENT NIGHT BY MICHAEL O'RILEY It was the l...   May 24 2004, 09:31 PM
pikimoo   lmao! That's vicious. I'm both Jewish ...   May 24 2004, 09:33 PM
machinoman   yeah no offense to anyone its just supposed to be ...   May 24 2004, 09:36 PM
triipinfserious   wow this is great (= keep it comin`   May 24 2004, 10:08 PM
pikimoo   I wanna see whatever it is that you're makin o...   May 25 2004, 12:53 AM
triipinfserious   i will it`s gunna be posted in june on my xang...   May 25 2004, 07:25 PM
o0h*s0o//d0rKaBlE   pOeM written by:me,Catherine Rochana K.(do you wan...   May 25 2004, 07:42 PM
triipinfserious   awhh that`s a swt poem   May 25 2004, 10:44 PM
ryfitaDF   lunchbox "the meaning of life" song In ...   May 25 2004, 11:21 PM
o0h*s0o//d0rKaBlE   QUOTE(triipinfserious @ May 25 2004, 10:44 PM...   May 26 2004, 11:03 AM
ComradeRed   What's with all the poetry no prose?   May 26 2004, 11:05 AM
triipinfserious   ryfitaDF what`s your name so i can put your cr...   May 26 2004, 07:33 PM
ryfitaDF   my real name is John but i like to be called Lunch...   May 26 2004, 09:45 PM
ryfitaDF   this is a song i wrote about going through a haun...   May 26 2004, 10:16 PM
RiddleMeWonders   Lindsey Kimbrow Three Poem; Published in the Poetr...   May 27 2004, 02:35 AM
RiddleMeWonders   Lindsey Kimbrow & Ashley Torbert (Untangible) ...   May 27 2004, 02:44 AM
triipinfserious   thnx (= i used your poem & quote   May 27 2004, 09:49 AM
Sa-Chan   Quotes: Things I've said in the past o_O By: S...   May 27 2004, 11:46 AM


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