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Poem 4 the Beautiful, ugly chicks will get theirs later... maybe
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post May 2 2006, 10:30 PM
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Hey, i just found this valentine's day poem i wrote this year. may i plz have ur attention

I only imagine you in everyway,
I only think of you all night and all day,
I only want you when im awake and when im sleep
You don't need a thing because you're everything 2 me
I'd never die 4 u, I'd rather live 2 love u
You can take my arms i'd still find ways 2 touch you
I've be hoping to find some1 like you
You're beautiful in everything you do
Not just another pretty face, but beauty divine
The only question is: Will you be my Valentine?
 
 
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post May 14 2006, 12:37 PM
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There actually is a kind of poem called a stealing poem where half of your poem is taken from a song or story or other literary form. But you have to give credit for it. I'm not going to comment on the poem seeing as it's been plaigerized and not properly credited. If this topic becomes out of hand, I'll have to close it. No more, "BAN HIM!!" or "HE STOLE ITT!!!" comments.
 

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PU$$Y_PUMP#R_3000   Poem 4 the Beautiful   May 2 2006, 10:30 PM
kittenxox   aww thats the CUTEST poem ever! whoever you wr...   May 2 2006, 10:36 PM
Intoxique   Lovely . Writing forums?   May 2 2006, 10:51 PM
Chii   Did you really write that? I like the "I...   May 2 2006, 11:44 PM
Angelina Taylor   Um, most of this is plagiarized. " only imag...   May 3 2006, 07:18 AM
priyas   This is soooo sweet.   May 4 2006, 12:05 AM
Angelina Taylor   Oh yeah, it's so sweet trying to be creative, ...   May 5 2006, 06:26 AM
mseryel2   QUOTE(Angelina Taylor @ May 5 2006, 4:26 ...   May 7 2006, 09:26 PM
illumineering   What's so sweet about this? Read the title. ...   May 5 2006, 10:48 AM
Angelina Taylor   I vote for a ban Taylor``   May 5 2006, 10:49 PM
illumineering   QUOTE(Angelina Taylor @ May 5 2006, 10:49...   May 6 2006, 12:03 AM
My Cinderella.   It's a very well written poem. But judging by ...   May 6 2006, 12:05 AM
illumineering   QUOTE(My Cinderella. @ May 6 2006, 12:05 ...   May 6 2006, 12:48 AM
oX_Muh_Nirvana_Xo   that was so cute :-)   May 6 2006, 07:28 PM
Rachel is love   Good lord people, calm the f**k down. This is a f*...   May 13 2006, 11:07 PM
tainted_angel   QUOTE(Rachel is love @ May 13 2006, 9:07 ...   May 14 2006, 12:50 PM
Shahin   QUOTE(Rachel is love @ May 13 2006, 9:07 ...   May 16 2006, 10:35 PM
iROCKYOURSOCKS   QUOTE(Rachel is love @ May 13 2006, 11:07...   May 16 2006, 11:05 PM
illumineering   QUOTE(iROCKYOURSOCKS @ May 16 2006, 11:05...   May 16 2006, 11:25 PM
Angelina Taylor   QUOTE(Rachel is love @ May 14 2006, 12:07...   May 17 2006, 12:07 PM
Paradox of Life   There actually is a kind of poem called a stealing...   May 14 2006, 12:37 PM
Rachel is love   Actually I am not an idiot, I think you are for ov...   May 17 2006, 10:35 PM
Angelina Taylor   QUOTE(Rachel is love @ May 17 2006, 11:35...   May 19 2006, 06:33 AM
Zatanna   What's with all the name calling and calls for...   May 18 2006, 09:03 AM
crazy2k   "I'd never die 4 u, I'd rather live 2...   May 19 2006, 07:20 AM


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