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 May 21 2004, 07:54 PM
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Just when you think life is pretty good Life screws you over like you knew it would Nothing goes right, it all comes crashing down You watch as it comes burning to the ground All your hopes and dreams collapse in seconds The gun stares at you and it's you it beckons Who are you, please explain? Only a nobody, completely insane Would they care if you're gone? They wouldn't even need a "so-long" One out of millions, no one cares Tried and tried searching to find no one there Months have died, they've moved on just fine No one has cried; I lay in the lonely grave of mine Looked and looked inside of me Nothing, just a pathetic tragedy Just a heartfelt ransom to nothing She just needed some encouraging Now she's gone forever more She never knew she meant a whole lot more Once again, the apologies came too late Here to eternity, she is no one; yet, she still waits |
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May 25 2004, 07:21 PM
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QUOTE(Kathleen @ May 25 2004, 7:16 PM) Yeah, it's about a suicidal person who dies with no one to care for her after her death. Heh. It's really not that hard to comprehend.  Yeah...I'll still be on suicide watch for the next tournaments, Minda...especially the ones I'll go up against you, Ralph, or Dan at.  - Dan Boada is dead. (Ok, not really, but he was wounded in a track meet so he can't go to CFLs. If it happens again he might die). - I'm a senior. (Ok, not really, but everyone thinks I am. Maybe this applies to judges as well). - Ralph is Ralph. (Ok, not really, he's an evil robot controlled by John Ashcroft). |
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Kathleen No one May 21 2004, 07:54 PM
EmeraldKnight Wow.. realli well written.. a tad cynical and depr... May 21 2004, 07:55 PM xjjajeengx really really factual and relly nice. did you wri... May 25 2004, 01:23 AM x_angawhomps Oy. *claps* May 25 2004, 01:31 AM angel-roh wow kathleen did u write that all by urself? cus i... May 25 2004, 01:52 AM Kathleen Hehe yes, I wrote it. Thanks Grace, Eve, and Susan... May 25 2004, 06:37 PM ComradeRed I don't get along well with poetry. I'm mu... May 25 2004, 06:43 PM Kathleen That's because you're a genius. I'm so... May 25 2004, 06:49 PM ComradeRed QUOTE(Kathleen @ May 25 2004, 6:49 PM)That... May 25 2004, 06:55 PM fiji_kid nice poem.. ::
but i dont get it..
iam not a p... May 25 2004, 06:56 PM Kathleen You don't get my poem? May 25 2004, 07:02 PM ComradeRed QUOTE(Kathleen @ May 25 2004, 7:02 PM)You don... May 25 2004, 07:11 PM Kathleen Yeah, it's about a suicidal person who dies wi... May 25 2004, 07:16 PM Kathleen Haha and that's supposed to comfort me...how? ... May 25 2004, 08:02 PM ComradeRed QUOTE(Kathleen @ May 25 2004, 8:02 PM)Haha an... May 25 2004, 08:08 PM orionpax clear cut, dark, and expressive. like an ususpecti... Jun 16 2004, 03:37 PM
Kathleen QUOTElike an ususpecting knife in ure back in a mo... Jun 17 2004, 11:50 AM |
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