Crimson Rose |
Crimson Rose |
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![]() Koorime ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 153 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 237,135 ![]() |
The wind whispers across
The beautiful roses. The heavenly scent carries Along the wind and I smile. Walking alone, along the gardens I come across a Solitary white rose. It was standing Tall and erect, And I grin to myself as I Notice that it was thornless. I pick it from its grassy home And bring it up to my Face to smell its scent, But as I glance at it, I gasp in surprise. The ivory rose was Stained crimson with blood. Dropping it with shock, I stare at my shaking hands. They were covered in blood And I was deathly afraid I looked up As I heard a whispery voice But I didn't see anyone Another white rose Was set out on the ground Right in front of me But this time I didn't let My love for flowers Get the best of me I didn't know if It was going to Be another crimson stained rose. I wouldn't take the chance. |
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![]() (Allison) ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Human Posts: 420 Joined: Apr 2006 Member No: 395,668 ![]() |
That was amazing, I loved how deep and symbolic it was. I wish I could write like that; whenever I try to write to let all my feelings out I get angrier because I realize I can't do it...O_o You're awesome though, and yes, I agree, best poem I've read in a long while.
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