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Crimson Rose
Dark's Angel
post May 2 2006, 04:55 PM
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The wind whispers across
The beautiful roses.
The heavenly scent carries
Along the wind and I smile.
Walking alone, along the gardens
I come across a
Solitary white rose.
It was standing
Tall and erect,
And I grin to myself as I
Notice that it was thornless.
I pick it from its grassy home
And bring it up to my
Face to smell its scent,
But as I glance at it,
I gasp in surprise.
The ivory rose was
Stained crimson with blood.
Dropping it with shock,
I stare at my shaking hands.
They were covered in blood
And I was deathly afraid
I looked up
As I heard a whispery voice
But I didn't see anyone
Another white rose
Was set out on the ground
Right in front of me
But this time I didn't let
My love for flowers
Get the best of me
I didn't know if
It was going to
Be another crimson stained rose.
I wouldn't take the chance.
 
 
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adolelolz
post May 11 2006, 04:44 PM
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That was amazing, I loved how deep and symbolic it was. I wish I could write like that; whenever I try to write to let all my feelings out I get angrier because I realize I can't do it...O_o You're awesome though, and yes, I agree, best poem I've read in a long while.
 

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