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May 2 2006, 04:55 PM
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![]() Koorime ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 153 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 237,135 |
The wind whispers across
The beautiful roses. The heavenly scent carries Along the wind and I smile. Walking alone, along the gardens I come across a Solitary white rose. It was standing Tall and erect, And I grin to myself as I Notice that it was thornless. I pick it from its grassy home And bring it up to my Face to smell its scent, But as I glance at it, I gasp in surprise. The ivory rose was Stained crimson with blood. Dropping it with shock, I stare at my shaking hands. They were covered in blood And I was deathly afraid I looked up As I heard a whispery voice But I didn't see anyone Another white rose Was set out on the ground Right in front of me But this time I didn't let My love for flowers Get the best of me I didn't know if It was going to Be another crimson stained rose. I wouldn't take the chance. |
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May 11 2006, 08:51 AM
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![]() Koorime ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 153 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 237,135 |
Thanks...Most of the time I just write what's on the top of my head at the time when I get inspired and it goes from there...Some of my poems I wouldn't call that great but I've brought others closer to me that were more personal....I've noticed that they had more emotion to them and they turned out better. Heh, I'm pretty strange when I get down to it... XD
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Dark's Angel Crimson Rose May 2 2006, 04:55 PM
Spiritual Winged Aura that's nice.
but i dont get the whole point o... May 2 2006, 06:12 PM
Dark's Angel It was more symbolic because most of the time I... May 4 2006, 06:33 PM
illumineering I'm pleased that I started reading your work t... May 5 2006, 11:18 AM
Dark's Angel Yeah most of the time it is...I usually pick up a ... May 5 2006, 02:16 PM
[Mediocre]Artist You write remarkable things that don't get the... May 10 2006, 10:03 PM
SoManyTearz You know, thats the first good poem I've read ... May 10 2006, 10:06 PM
Crueldade That was amazing, I loved how deep and symbolic it... May 11 2006, 04:44 PM![]() ![]() |