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post May 9 2006, 05:59 PM
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post May 10 2006, 10:07 PM
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I love the concept and I love how it was presented but there's something that nags at me in regards to the syntax. It strikes me as compulsive thoughts just thrown onto paper; true emotion without structure and thoughts that were connected but at the same time not. Maybe thats what you were going for.
 

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