Broken Mirror, Losing You |
 Apr 18 2006, 07:56 PM
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 Koorime  Group: Member Posts: 153 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 237,135  |
I stare at the broken mirror and I cry
My heart is broken I can see your immobile body It scares me I'm terrified I can't move Blood slowly begins to seep around you I try to scream your name But I can't speak It's like I'm trapped in my body I can't save you Tears run down my face The mirror is slowly misting over I'm losing my last chance to save you I struggle to move but I only move an inch The doors of the mansion whip open with the wind As your spirit rides the wind I cry silently |
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May 5 2006, 11:27 AM
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 I love Havasupai Group: Member Posts: 1,040 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 163,878 |
Now that I have read several of your works, there seems to be a strong theme of unreconciled loss that is screaming at the top of its lungs. Your ability to peer through the veil of this challenge is brilliant! I'm sure your work resonates with many people as the ability to describe suffering touches many. I hope you will be able to write from the space of peace and acceptance some day!
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Dark's Angel Broken Mirror, Losing You Apr 18 2006, 07:56 PM
nikkkkki I love it, and I love the way it makes me feel. Apr 29 2006, 01:58 PM Dark's Angel I have written something along the lines of peace ... May 5 2006, 02:13 PM
oX_Muh_Nirvana_Xo This is so up beat.. :-) May 7 2006, 02:44 PM |
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