Makeup Can Affect Life |
 May 4 2006, 12:07 AM
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The Cheerleader Chelsea spends most of the day puckering her lips as she replenishes her pink shiny lip gloss between classes. Her makeup kit full of lipsticks, eyeliner, eye shadow, gloss, and mascara takes up half her locker. She prefers going on a shopping spree at Sephora, her temple, rather than finishing her five paragraph essay that’s due the next day. This is the same girl who will end up a single mom covered in skin rashes living in a one room apartment with two rowdy, studious children.
This is a paragraph that i was writing. so yea. |
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May 4 2006, 01:04 AM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
I don't know if I really agree with that, lol.
Nothing wrong with makeup or being a single mom. But that's besides the point. but keep writing, try to expand on your ideas more. |
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priyas Makeup Can Affect Life May 4 2006, 12:07 AM
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illumineering I like the first two sentences. The third one doe... May 5 2006, 10:55 AM |
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