i carve poetry into my wrists as this darkness drowns me in blood. |
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 May 1 2006, 08:05 PM
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as i walked close to you. you killed me. slowly, bloodily, painfully, orgasmicly.
i slit my arms. i slit my legs. i slit my penis. all for you. You're all i want and need. you have left me here bruised and alone. no one wants me. a love deprived freak. thanks to you. so as i drown into the sorrows of the mainstream corruption i think of you. your words that you said to me. "i love you" You kill me. slowly, deeply, painfully, enjoyable. i have slit my penis once again. only to thank you for breaking me apart. -bows and eCuts rapidly- |
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May 2 2006, 08:43 PM
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ohhhh, my. I like it. just not the part about the penis. maybe you should use a different word or something to replace it. to make it sound more professional.
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chaneun i carve poetry into my wrists as this darkness drowns me in blood. May 1 2006, 08:05 PM
No Fear emo...very emo.... May 1 2006, 08:05 PM Tribal J_Rome Lol you slit your penis? >.< May 1 2006, 08:10 PM oX_Muh_Nirvana_Xo What kind of knife did you use?
See this matters,... May 1 2006, 08:12 PM Smoogrish HAHAHA.
go eCut yourself, eEmo. May 1 2006, 08:44 PM Paradox of Life ... I can't believe I actually laughed at this... May 1 2006, 08:47 PM ermfermoo Remember, its down the road, not across the street... May 1 2006, 09:01 PM skp86 i like it, but it's very emo, and i don't ... May 2 2006, 02:31 PM StanleyThePanda you are awesome May 2 2006, 02:55 PM Paradox of Life ^ She was trying to be funny, not serious, lol. May 2 2006, 09:31 PM jooleeah well, that's pretty disgusting.
<3 chri... May 4 2006, 02:25 PM davexd are u trying to make ppl laugh? "slit my peni... May 9 2006, 09:22 PM Intoxique Were you walking beside John?
I like your penis sl... May 9 2006, 09:25 PM SoManyTearz I think that was a bit cliche.
i carve poetry into... May 9 2006, 10:31 PM
anqie damn i was all feeling it too until i read, ... May 9 2006, 10:36 PM |
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