Crimson Rose |
 May 2 2006, 04:55 PM
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The wind whispers across
The beautiful roses. The heavenly scent carries Along the wind and I smile. Walking alone, along the gardens I come across a Solitary white rose. It was standing Tall and erect, And I grin to myself as I Notice that it was thornless. I pick it from its grassy home And bring it up to my Face to smell its scent, But as I glance at it, I gasp in surprise. The ivory rose was Stained crimson with blood. Dropping it with shock, I stare at my shaking hands. They were covered in blood And I was deathly afraid I looked up As I heard a whispery voice But I didn't see anyone Another white rose Was set out on the ground Right in front of me But this time I didn't let My love for flowers Get the best of me I didn't know if It was going to Be another crimson stained rose. I wouldn't take the chance. |
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May 2 2006, 06:12 PM
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that's nice.
but i dont get the whole point of blood. |
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