Broken Mirror, Losing You |
 Apr 18 2006, 07:56 PM
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 Koorime  Group: Member Posts: 153 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 237,135  |
I stare at the broken mirror and I cry
My heart is broken I can see your immobile body It scares me I'm terrified I can't move Blood slowly begins to seep around you I try to scream your name But I can't speak It's like I'm trapped in my body I can't save you Tears run down my face The mirror is slowly misting over I'm losing my last chance to save you I struggle to move but I only move an inch The doors of the mansion whip open with the wind As your spirit rides the wind I cry silently |
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Apr 29 2006, 01:58 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 95 Joined: Apr 2006 Member No: 398,023 |
I love it, and I love the way it makes me feel.
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Dark's Angel Broken Mirror, Losing You Apr 18 2006, 07:56 PM
illumineering Now that I have read several of your works, there ... May 5 2006, 11:27 AM Dark's Angel I have written something along the lines of peace ... May 5 2006, 02:13 PM
oX_Muh_Nirvana_Xo This is so up beat.. :-) May 7 2006, 02:44 PM |
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