best writings, post your stuff Options

[triipinfserious]

i`m creatin` somethin` for my xanga; it`ll have the best original poetry, stories, songs, `nd or quotes that people i kno have made.

please post your best poem[s], song[s], story[ies]`nd or quote[s]

i will post the best ones i see on my xanga in june.

please post
1. your name
2. the title of your piece of work
3. what it is [i.e. poem or song or whatever]

thanks (=

This post has been edited by triipinfserious: May 24 2004, 08:36 PM

[*Kathleen*]

Haha nice, Minda. Yeah, I have these...I can't pick which one, so you can.

With All My Heart
Cut me open and watch me die because of you
I loved you with all my heart and you knew
I'll bleed all over you as fast as an epidemic
I'll do that so much you'll hate living - you'll regret it

Tear me open and watch my heart beat for you
Listen, listen close because every breath is true
Racing through your mind evil and dark
I'll never stop, until I know I've made my mark
Paying for the crime you committed (and will probably do more)
I do them all a favor by making you suffer for
My blood is one with you; I'm in your head
Don't count on me leaving until you are dead

Rip my heart out and leave it for the world to see
I loved you every ounce; it was supposed to be
But since you don't feel the same and betray
You will rot forever i the depths of Hell to decay
No longer attached to something not there,
When it's you I see, it's for you I won't care
Love is a fragile bond that you viciously ended
All because you claim to love another I've befriended
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No Need For a Name
There she sits, all alone
No one to talk to; no one knows
Jocks tease her, pull her hair
Cheerleaders just like to stare
She drops her books right there
To no surprise, no one cares
Never has spoken a word
Freak, reject, loser; they call her "The Nerd"

Confined in her own world, she lays
They've kept her buried alive all these days
No one heard the screams or the yelps
Absolutely no one heard her shrieks for help
She stares up at the ceiling as she fears
They're shouting, fighting; coming near
Pain wells inside of her
She knew who they were

Same, boring, ordinary day
The jocks see her and come out to play
She's been waiting for this in years
Her heart beats faster as they drew near
Tick-tock-tick-tock is what's ahead
Laughing, squealing like pigs, she smiles
She looks up, one last thing she sees are stone tiles
She rips open her jacket to find
The very reason they say she was out of her mind
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Blood Thief
By day, he stalks
By night, he preys
Endless nights
Lonesome days

Longing to walk in the sun
As he devours the current victim, he asks
"Why did I have to be the one?"
Blood seeps through his pale fingers
With a thud, she drops to the ground
Even he sensed that her spirit still lingered
Staggering onward, he looks to the sky
Dazzling stars still danced; he was safe
He lives forever, but still asks, "Why?"

In a way, he's cursed for eternity
At the same time, one would say he deserves it
But many have not yet seen
Oh how he loved to torture, and still does
That's partly why he's this now
A blood thief, just because...