best writings, post your stuff Options

[triipinfserious]

i`m creatin` somethin` for my xanga; it`ll have the best original poetry, stories, songs, `nd or quotes that people i kno have made.

please post your best poem[s], song[s], story[ies]`nd or quote[s]

i will post the best ones i see on my xanga in june.

please post
1. your name
2. the title of your piece of work
3. what it is [i.e. poem or song or whatever]

thanks (=

This post has been edited by triipinfserious: May 24 2004, 08:36 PM

[Sa-Chan]

By: Savannah


To Damn Perfect-


And when you left,
I was alone and I cried.
But I never stopped loving you,
And couldn't help but hating you.

Leave me here,
But I won't forgive you.
Next time we meet,
I swear you'll never forget me.

I want you to know the pain,
Of all the heartbreak.
All of those tears,
I wasted upon you.

I don't want to give into,
All of those lies you used to say.
You said we'd make it,
You said we could take it.

I'll forget all those words you told me,
Over the phone,
While we planned our future,
With two boys and two girls...

It was all just to damn perfect.


Pain- (This was originally a song that I wrote, but I never finished it, but one day just you wait, my band will finish it and we will perform it)

I close my eyes,
I drop the blade.
Overtaken with the beating,
Of neverending pain.

I burn my skin,
I beat my flesh.
I cause the welts,
Of pain and death.

This is my way to escape,
The pain is all that saves me.
The blood it's what...
What bathes me.

It's like a drug,
It's my new prison, my new pain,
Built by knives and chains,
And I can't stop the addiction.

It's a battle with myself,
And it's neverending.
And I can't fight,
And I can barely breath.

Save me from this pain...